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RE: wanted to get some opinions
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Nice, Havoc - at the end of the day, it may not be 'classical' poetry, but it gets your message across, and that's what is most important. Last verse - Vietnamese ? Keep it up, Poetry seems to be a fading art these days....
Nice, Havoc - at the end of the day, it may not be 'classical' poetry, but it gets your message across, and that's what is most important. Last verse - Vietnamese ? Keep it up, Poetry seems to be a fading art these days....
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RE: wanted to get some opinions
lol when we met it was during the rainy season in ho chi minh. so it would go from being 80-90 deg and sunny to thunder/lighting and pouring down rain in a moments notice
this is the cafe where we had our 1st date. no joke like 5 minutes before this picture it was beautiful and sunny . it was still great cause i love the rain
this is the cafe where we had our 1st date. no joke like 5 minutes before this picture it was beautiful and sunny . it was still great cause i love the rain
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I have to be honest, I am never really a fan of poems that rhyme, unless it is by someone like Robert Frost. I find I am always paying more attention to the words that are being rhymed than the actual sentiment. I also like to write. I like try to get my message across with the least amount of words. My hero is Emily Dickinson, as she was a master at that. You know what is a good habit to get into? Reading what you have written outloud to yourself. It is totally different thatn reading things back in your head. You can hear akward phrasing and even catch typo's that way. Should help some. When you invest time into writing, you are exposing your soul, and I applaud you sharing these personal things with us. I think the CBR Forum is a great place for poetry.
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