NEED YOUR OPINION AND HELP
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NEED YOUR OPINION AND HELP
Okay After some prodding by some fellow members and others on this subject I have been working very slowly on a book, fiction of course. Yes, fiction. Now have had quite a bit of Australian help with this project. MarkR is Web hosting it and my co-author is an old Australian friend, who is a published author, and for those who don't know, Swt poet has had a few poems published, and it has met with her approval SO Far. It's Got a Grand Conspiracy, Murder, Intrigue, Hot Cars, Fast Bikes And Hotter Women, So Here's a Link to A Few Pages
BTW
Be Kind You Guys Know How Sensitive I Am so go easy on me LOL
http://cid-fd1db3fa41cb79a5.skydrive.live.com/self.aspx/CBR1000F/Into%20the%20Light.pdf
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RE: NEED YOUR OPINION AND HELP
It has good plot. The paragraphs seem to flow very smooth. It reads as though you jottted many notes for each of the chapters to take place in a sequence and this book appears to be able to draw the reader in with it's details. I liked it so far and I'm not that much of a fictional reader. Which is completely due to my profession and text books.
Nice work!
Nice work!
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Not bad HC, got to the 3rd paragraph & no mention of a gratuitous sex scene? (just kidding, but only just). I'm no writer, I have trouble completing a shopping list, (although I have spent boring hours/months of my life writing reports), but if its like anything else, you will hone your skills as you go. I found it interesting reading, its got a certain "In your face" style. Now, about those gratuitous sex scene's.........................................
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Oh HC....
Make sure you stick your copyright on there.
[blockquote]© 2006 John Doe
[/blockquote]Information on copyright http://www.copyright.gov/circs/circ1.html#hsc
Make sure you stick your copyright on there.
[blockquote]© 2006 John Doe
[/blockquote]Information on copyright http://www.copyright.gov/circs/circ1.html#hsc