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Old Mar 7, 2008 | 07:26 PM
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Okay After some prodding by some fellow members and others on this subject I have been working very slowly on a book, fiction of course. Yes, fiction. Now have had quite a bit of Australian help with this project. MarkR is Web hosting it and my co-author is an old Australian friend, who is a published author, and for those who don't know, Swt poet has had a few poems published, and it has met with her approval SO Far. It's Got a Grand Conspiracy, Murder, Intrigue, Hot Cars, Fast Bikes And Hotter Women, So Here's a Link to A Few Pages
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Be Kind You Guys Know How Sensitive I Am so go easy on me LOL


http://cid-fd1db3fa41cb79a5.skydrive.live.com/self.aspx/CBR1000F/Into%20the%20Light.pdf
 
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Old Mar 7, 2008 | 08:30 PM
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havent finished reading it, as i am about to leave for the night...but from what i read so far, it kept me interested!
 
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Old Mar 7, 2008 | 08:31 PM
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Please hold ima print and read, very tough to focus on monitor this long.
 
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Old Mar 7, 2008 | 10:05 PM
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Just finished it Hardcorp....and i say you got a good thing goin!!!

-Adam
 
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Old Mar 7, 2008 | 11:12 PM
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From a not so crusty Navy ordanance mustang point of view its pretty good, I look forward to reading more. Keep it up!!
 
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Old Mar 7, 2008 | 11:34 PM
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I love a good fast reading page turner, so I like your style so far. Seems like the kind of book I'dtypically finish in 2 days, if my interest is held. And so far, you've done that. Good luck! I'll buy the paperback.
 
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Old Mar 7, 2008 | 11:36 PM
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It has good plot. The paragraphs seem to flow very smooth. It reads as though you jottted many notes for each of the chapters to take place in a sequence and this book appears to be able to draw the reader in with it's details. I liked it so far and I'm not that much of a fictional reader. Which is completely due to my profession and text books.

Nice work!
 
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Old Mar 8, 2008 | 12:09 AM
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Not bad HC, got to the 3rd paragraph & no mention of a gratuitous sex scene? (just kidding, but only just). I'm no writer, I have trouble completing a shopping list, (although I have spent boring hours/months of my life writing reports), but if its like anything else, you will hone your skills as you go. I found it interesting reading, its got a certain "In your face" style. Now, about those gratuitous sex scene's.........................................
 
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Old Mar 8, 2008 | 12:07 PM
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Wow...great writing...didn't read all of it yet, but very interesting. Nice job.
 
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Old Mar 8, 2008 | 01:05 PM
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Oh HC....

Make sure you stick your copyright on there.

[blockquote]© 2006 John Doe

[/blockquote]Information on copyright http://www.copyright.gov/circs/circ1.html#hsc
 
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