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Old 03-20-2008, 03:26 AM
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pleasure turns to the pain
lessons learned from the strain
questions burned in my brain..
about whether love is humane
in its touch.
these thoughts are like salmon swimming upstream
in the tears of your deceit.
fighting the current hurt that kills more than is created by the chaos
of our intertwined emotions.
chaotic because the anchor of Erros' arrow has been plucked
from the vessel of my undying infatuation
separation not as simple as the distance between us
my mind no longer possessed by demons
that have been the overseers of my enslavement to your lies
the seeds of these lies rooted so deeply
they have cracked the foundation of what we once shared
allowing the faith in us i had sealed inside
to gush out like a river
ripping the image of our future together from my thoughts
as violently and as brutally as if it were a child
being taken from its mothers arms
im left surrounded in darkness
but i refuse to be swallowed by it
my lonliness like the night air
invisible to the eye
obvious to the touch
it is cold uncomfortableness
yet if i could do it all over again
id do it in the same skin im in
to lay down and let love die
just stay down and let love lie?
no, no..not i
id stay around and let love fly
even though i have seen its darkest form
deceit
nothing else could taste this warm
or feel this sweet...



SORRY, this is a good one, had to post it.
 
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Old 03-20-2008, 03:42 AM
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Are you alright Sam .. what's brought this on? ... hope you're fine :-)

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Old 03-20-2008, 03:54 AM
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no i'm great you miss the meaning of it, try reading it again while smiling
 
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Old 03-20-2008, 03:58 AM
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no i'm great you miss the meaning of it, try reading it again while smiling
alright Sam ... glad you're fine :-)

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Old 03-20-2008, 04:04 AM
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just so is known, its about the loss of love and how it isn't going to stop the writer from loving again, how though he was seriously wronged by some one he let in, he will let someone else in, he will not give up. its tatted on my tummy.
 
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Old 03-20-2008, 04:15 AM
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just so is known, its about the loss of love and how it isn't going to stop the writer from loving again, how though he was seriously wronged by some one he let in, he will let someone else in, he will not give up. its tatted on my tummy.
I knew the meaning Sam ... I just wondered if things were ok with you ... love hurts us all ... sends us to hell and back ... but I could never imagine a world without love ... that would be bleak and not worth living ... we're all so much more than our physical selves :-)

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Old 03-20-2008, 04:25 AM
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ok. it got me through some crap ( this poem) so i had it tatted on me yesterday, holds a lot of meaning, makes me smile.
 
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Old 03-20-2008, 04:51 AM
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The greatest thing you’ll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.




ADVISORY: Stay out of here Mr. Fish or you just may be violently sick ... *giggles*

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Old 03-20-2008, 05:50 AM
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Wait... you've got this thread tatooed on you?

Maybe you just meant the poem?

In all seriousness, is it in English or characters or what? I can't imagine that not taking up an entire chest for it to be legible...

Pictures?
 
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Old 03-20-2008, 06:30 AM
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its on my tummy takes up about 2/3's of it, it was some thing i wanted, it has a large meaning to me. if it didn't i wouldn't have got it ya know. the letters are a bout this big and its paragraphed not like i posted t, goes in a curve around my bellybutton. looks good.
 


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